I need my paper solid…..here is what is wrong with the paper from professor “The biggest issues are that 1) you still don’t have solid measures identified which is going to have a cascade effect. If you don’t know how you’re measuring a construct, you can’t figure out what results to do which impacts your discussion. Which brings me to the second issue… I just don’t know what’s going on with your results! I can truly see how hard you are trying and I know that you genuinely care and want to do well. But I need you to just follow the plan instead of adding in a bunch of graphs and charts. You are expending so much energy… but not in the right places. Go to the PPT on results. Go to the slide on independent samples t-tests. Copy and paste what I have written on the slide. Then update it to match your variables. Remember – you have 2 DVs (stress & anxiety) so you need to do this twice! One for each!
Then in the discussion, give 1 paragraph for EACH DV. What was the hypothesis? Was it supported? Why/why not? What did you find? I lay this all out in the discussion lecture, but if anything is unclear please let me know and we can talk about it. You also need to identify 3 limitations & future directions and give a conclusion paragraph.”
Ive attached the original paper, powerpoint slide on the structure of the paper, introduction, methods, result and discussion overall powerpoints of the class