Please, I need someone skilled in financial analysis and decision making for this. I’ve already written the paper, I just need help rewriting it. It needs to be according to her instructions. She sent it back to me without a grade. It has to be put into words without plagiarism, so please see that it doesn’t match in Turnitin.
My professor said “61% of this submission precisely matches an internet service called blablawriting. This is not only quite high in my experience. I also find several inconsistencies some of which are not included in our course materials. For example, I asked you to assume a discount rate of 12%, and nearly your whole first paragraph matches this internet service instead of what I asked you to use. I also have never mentioned (nor does your book cover) APV and yet you refer to it often.
I also don’t see how you concluded that the current value of the second generation would lead you to conclude that it’s a good idea? We have no information about what PPP thinks the projections could be.”
I’ve attached the case study and my written paper. Please rewrite it according to her instruction and without detection, thank you.