Hello, I would like to get a high B on this essay nothing lower than a low B. This is a 7 page paper with one page of a bibliography. I have already started a thesis but my teacher didn’t like it very much. I will attach his comments and feel free to change the thesis to your liking.
Thesis:In the film The Blind Side, it shows the significance of seeing past one’s race and economic status to better another human’s life. This was created by the relation of Sandra Bullock’s power in her community and presenting him as an equal to her family.
Teachers comments: Is your view of the movie a bit naïve, after the research that you have read? I don’t mean to insult you, but how are your sources perceiving the movie? Are they not looking at the underlying racial messages? How might the movie compare and contrast with Michael Lewis’s biography of Michael Oher? Could you argue how Hollywood adapted the biography and why they adapted it in the manner that they did?
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