The Paper attached must be improved and rewritten according to these notes:
1) The introduction should not be in thesis’s. To fix. Add problems, structure, etc. According to requirements for standard Term Paper writing.
2) The Term Paper should not be written in the first person. Please correct if it appears so anywhere.
3) For Chapter I: Two sources about business model are not enough. There are no analysis of the term definition as well. Also, classifications of models should also be added.
4) For Chapter 1.2 — The comparison failed, it needs to be done.
5) For Chapter 1.3 — What exactly does digitalization make? How does it affect individual elements of a business model? There are no answers.
6) For Chapter II — What is common and special in these two cases? How do they illustrate the transformation of business models?
7) If possible, please structure and rewrite my work where it needs to be done.
The plagiarism checker in my university is also very strict, so please be careful with citations. Every citing must be done the way it is already made throughout my paper.